2024届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项解析汇编（第01期）：专题05 短文改错（教师版）
2024届高考模拟试题分类汇编（1）之短文改错
traffic flow. But the most important thing is what the number of private cars should be put under the control. Meanwhile, buses should have its own special routes which cannot be using by other vehicles. Therefore, underground train and city train should be developed quickly.
I do hope my suggestions will be taken.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
71.complaining后面加about
72.serious--seriously
73.advices--advice
74.other--another
75.that--which
76.what--that
77.under后面的the去掉
78.its--their
79.using--used
80.Therefore—Besides/Moreover
74.other—another
考查代词。For another
75.that--which
考查定语从句；that不能引导非限制性定语从句，which可以引导非限制性定语从句；
76.what--that
考查表语从句；句意：但最重要的是事情是私家车的数量应该得到控制；
77.under后面的the去掉
考查固定短语。Under control处在控制之下；
78.its--their
考查代词。句意：同时，公交车有他们自己的专线，这是其它机动车所不能使用的。
79.using--used
考查被动语态。Be used by 被。。使用；
80.Therefore—Besides/Moreover 考查副词。除此之后，地铁发展也很迅速；
考点 短文改错。It is Mother’s Day today. Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. While he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked dishes in kitchen. The dishes I cooked was Mom’s favorite. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mom was grateful and moving to tears.
【答案】
71.so--but
72.houseworks--housework
73.or--and
74.get--got
75.on去掉；
76. While--When
77.her--his
78.in后面加the
79.were--was
80.moving--moved
72.houseworks--housework 考查名词。“housework”是不可数名词，故把 houseworks---housework—and
考查连词
both---and---，两个都---。故把 or---and。—got
考查动词的时态。句意：在母亲节我们起床早。根据句意可知用一般过去时态，故把get---gotgo shopping 去购物。可知去掉on—When 考查连词。句意：当他回来时，我发现他手里有朵花。
77.her--his
考查代词。句意：在爸爸手里。故把her---his
【江西省丰城中学2024届高三上学期第一次段考】短文改错（共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分）
短文中共有10处语言错误，每行中最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出增加的词;
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉;
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.
Much love,
Fiona
【答案】
73.Unfortunate-- Unfortunately
74.for--as
75.mile--miles
76.unless--until
77.here--there
78.as后面加a
79.they--We
80.to去掉
考点 ：短文改错。
【湖北省沙市中学2024届高三上学期第二次考试】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
【答案】
1.side→sides
2.from→of
3.sit→sitting
4.easy→easily
5.is→was
6.them→it
7.not去掉
8.in^ hurry→a
9.felt→feel
10.If→Although/Though
3.sit→sitting
动词形式错误。Enjoy后用v-ing形式。第二句：sit→sitting。 4.easy→easily
词性错误。此处用副词修饰动词see。第三句：easy→easily修饰动词see应用副词，所以easy改为easily。 5.is→was
时态错误。根据上下文，用过去时。第五句： is→was时态误用。全文用的都是过去时，所以要把is改为was。 6.them→it
代词误用。此处指代前面提到的park，用单数。第六句：them→it代词误用。这里指代的是park，所以要把them改为it。 7.not去掉
从句意判断：从远处能欣赏到雪山美景。第七句：删掉could后的not根据上下文可知这里应该是表肯定，所以把not删掉。 【知识拓展】
含a的固定短语或习惯用法
have a rest 休息一会儿；have a good time 玩得开心；have a break休息一会儿； in a hurry 匆忙；after a while过了一会儿； once in a while 偶尔；have a good idea 有一个好主意；as a matter of fact事实上； in a word总而言之； make a choice 做出选择；a success一个成功的人，一件成功的事； a failure一个失败的人，一件失败的事； an honour一个荣幸的人，一个荣幸的事； have a good knowledge of 有某方面的好知识。
考点：考查短文改错
【湖北省襄阳市第五中学2024届高三上学期开学考试】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One of my happiest childhood memories were having dinner with my parents and two sisters. As a result, found that we seldom had a chance to get together, we decided we would set aside three evenings the week for a sit-down dinner. First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or Fridays. After a couple of week of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy. For a while, the kids began to resist the idea. They said they would rather to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities. Gradual, though, they began to see these evenings together for a very different way. We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other’s problems. Since a few months, we all felt we had been able to build much strong relationships with the family than we had before.
【答案】
1.were改was/is
2.found前having
3.a week
4.and Fridays
5.a couple of weeks
6.would rather spend
7.Gradually
8.for改in
9.Since改After
10.strong改stronger
3.a week
句意：一周三个晚上。故把the week改成a week。
4.and Fridays
此处表示并列，故把or Fridays改成and Fridays。
5.a couple of weeks
a couple of+名词复数，故把a couple of week改成a couple of weeks。
6.would rather spend
would rather后跟动词原形，故把would rather to spend改成would rather spend。
7.Gradually
副词修饰整个句子，故把Gradual改成Gradually。
8.for改in
固定词组：in a different way用一种不同的方式，故把for改in。
9.Since改After
句意：几个月之后，故把Since改After。
10.strong改stronger
根据much和than可知此处用比较级，故把strong改stronger。
【知识归纳】
would rather的用法
一、概述。 1.含义。“宁愿/可,更/最好,还是…为好”。 2.用法。常+V原,常省略为’d rather,表优先选择的一种方式 。无人称,数,词性,时态变化,所有的人称情况均用would rather. 3.否定形式。would rather not do sth。例: Mr Li would rather not listen to rock music 4.would /had在此决无“过去”之意，它是一个情态助动词。 If you’d rather be alone, we’ll all leave here. 如果你宁愿独自呆着，那我们都离开这儿。
二、扩展。 1.在两者中取舍,表“宁愿……而不愿……/与其……宁可……”时，则可用would rather…than…或would…rather than…句型. 例: I would rather watch TV at home than go to the cinema. 2.也可以颠倒为：rather than…would… 例：Rather than work in such bad condition, he would give up 3.Would(rather)和than后都接不带to的动词不定式，若选同一动词,那么than 后的动词可以省略。 例: I would rather have noodles than rice.
三、would rather+从句，常用的虚拟语气句型,谓语一般用过去时来表示现在或将来。 其意为“宁愿……,还是…… 好些”“一个人宁愿另一个人做某事”。引导从句的that常省略。在谈到过去的动作时，谓语则用过去完成时。 例: John wants to see me today. I would rather he came to tomorrow than today. 句中came不是表示过去而是表示将来.
考点：考查短文改错
【湖北省襄阳市第四中学2024届高三八月第一周周考】短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
英语课上，老师要求同桌相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号 （^），并在此符号下面写出改加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Li Hui, my friend in high school, has dreamed becoming a cartoon artist since she was young. To her disappointed, her parents don’t agree with her decision at first. Therefore, Li Hui would not change her mind. She worked hardly to perfect her skills. Just before he finished high school, the chance came: the famous art school was holding a cartoon drawing competition. The first three winner would be given a scholarship to study drawing there. Li Hui told herself not to missing the chance. She readily entered the competition and came second. She is now a student in that school and I feel it certain that her dream will come true.
【答案】
71.dreamed后加of或aboutdisappointed → disappointment.
73.don’t → didn’t.
74.Therefore → However.
75.hardly → hard.
76.he → she.
77.the → a.
78.winner → winners.
79. missing → miss.
80.去掉it73.don’t → didn’t.考查时态。故事是高中时发生的事要用过去时，故don’t → didn’t.
74.Therefore → However.考查连词。句意：她的父母起初不同意她的决定，然而她没有改变主意。此处表示转折不是因果，故Therefore → However.
75.hardly → hard.考查副词。hardly 几乎不； hard努力地。此处指她努力工作完善技能。表示“努力地”，故hardly → hard.
76.he → she.考查代词。上文提到李慧，代词用的是she，her是女生，故he → she.
77.the → a.考查冠词。此处指一次机会来了，表示一次，故the → a.
78.winner → winners.考查名词。此处指前三名获胜者所以名词要用复数形式，故winner → winners.
79. missing → miss.考查动词形式。tell sb. not to do sth.告诉某人不要做某事，to后用动词原形，故 missing → miss.
80.去掉itfeel是系动词certain是表语，不用it。故去掉it短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中至多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning I saw off my aunt at railway station. There were many passenger in the waiting room. I saw an old lady crying sad because she had lost her ticket and not able to afford another one. I was thinking about helping her when a man come up to comfort her. Then he bought her a ticket with his own money. The old Lady was so moving that she could hardly say a word. She grasped his hand and asked for his name or address. But he only smile and said, “It’s my pleasure.” Then he left away quickly. I was greatly moved by such a man he warmed others with his love.
【答案】
1.at ∧railway加the
2.passenger--- passengers
3.sad---sadly
4.and ∧not加was
5.come---came
6.moving---moved
7.or---and
8.smile--smiled
9.去掉away
10.he---who
3.sad---sadly
本题考查形容词的副词用法。根据题干分析我看到以为老妇人正在伤心地哭泣，sad是形容词，修饰动词cry要用副词形式，所以要在sad后加ly
4.and ∧not加was
本题考查be able to do sth的用法。根据题干分析她负担不起再买一张票。Be able to do sth.是能做某事的固定用法，所以要在not able to前加was。
