（五年高考）2024届高考英语专题复习：专题17 短文改错（全国通用）

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　　专题十七短文改错

　　2024～2011年各省市高考题

　　Passage 1　(2024·新课标全国)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，we'll live to regret it.

　　答案　

　　to live in the city.I

　　I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in

　　countryside.There the air is clean

　　the mountains are green.Unfortunately， the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have

　　shown that global warming has already become a very

　　problem.The

　　we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. rare animals are dying out.We must

　　ways to protect

　　environment.If we fail to do so，we'll live to regret it.

　　1.解析　考查动词的时态。根据前面一句可知这是发生在小时候的事情故用一般过去时态。

　　答案　第2句think→thought

　　2.解析　考查冠词的用法。in the countryside (在乡村)为固定短语。

　　答案　第3句：countryside前加the

　　解析　考查并列词的用法。那儿的空气洁净群山葱绿。由句意可知两个分句之间显然为并列关系而非选择关系。

　　答案　第4句：or→and

　　解析　考查介词的用法。with the development of...为一固定短语意思是“随着……的发展”。

　　答案　第5句：on→with

　　解析　考查被动语态的用法。众多研究表明全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。由句意可知和谓语show之间为主动关系故要用主动语态。

　　答案　第6句：去掉been

　　解析　考查形容词的用法。修饰名词problem应当用形容词。

　　答案　第6句：seriously→serious

　　解析　考查不可数名词的用法。air作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。

　　答案　第7句：airs→air

　　解析　考查代词的用法。Animals为可数名词复数故many。

　　答案　第8句：Much→Many

　　解析　考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后面要接动词原形。

　　答案　第9句：found→find

　　解析　考查语境中代词的用法。依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知your与上下文相悖结合句意应当改为our/the才能使句意通顺。

　　答案　第9句：your→our

　　Passage 2　(2024·新课标全国)

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅

　　2.只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　ks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

　　答案　

　　.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy

　　a shop window.He liked it so

　　much that he quickly walked into the shop.After

　　at the toy for some time，he turned around and found

　　his parents were missing.Tony was scared and

　　to cry.A woman saw him crying and

　　him to wait outside

　　shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw

　　parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were

　　1.解析　考查名词复数。由第五句中的“his parents were missing.”可知此处应当用复数形式。

　　答案　第1句：parent→parents

　　解析　考查介词的用法。玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的in。

　　答案　第3句： on→in

　　解析　考查固定句型的用法。由语境可知托尼非常喜欢这个玩具于是快速走进商店。so...that...为固定句型意思是“如此……以致于……”故去掉very。

　　答案　第4句：去掉very

　　解析　考查省略的用法。After之后省去了主语he与look at之间为逻辑上的主谓关

　　答案　第5句： looks→looking

　　解析　考查宾语从句连接词的用法。动词found之后为宾语从句从句为系表结构意思完整故将where去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的that。

　　答案　第5句：去掉where或where→that

　　解析　考查并列谓语的用法。由句子结构可知与was scared并列因此要用一般过去时。

　　答案　第6句：begun→began

　　解析　考查并列谓语的用法。有一位妇女看到他哭泣就告诉他去商店外面等。由句意可知这一动作是这个妇女发出的应当与saw构成并列谓语。故改用told。

　　答案　第7句：telling→told

　　解析　考查冠词的用法。表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定

　　答案　第7句：a→the

　　解析　考查物主代词的用法。根据句意及英语表达习惯应当在parents前加上与主语相一致的物主代词。

　　答案　第8句：saw后加his

　　解析　考查副词的用法。形容词worried之前要用副词来修饰。

　　答案　第10句：terrible→terribly

　　Passage 3　(2024·四川)

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：

　　每句不超过两个错误；

　　每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Hi,

　　It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.

　　As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity! In fact，I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me，would you talk to him?

　　Please help with me and give me some advice.

　　Grace

　　答案　

　　It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really

　　want ∧to share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.

　　As I

　　you last time, I made three new

　　here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time

　　in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me .And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity! In fact I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. do you think I should do? If you

　　me，would you talk to ？

　　me and give me some advice.

　　Grace

　　1.解析　考查动词want的用法后用不定式作状语故加上to。

　　答案　want后加to

　　解析　考查时态。根据时间状语last timetell改成told。句意：正如我上次告诉你的那样。

　　答案　tell→told

　　解析　考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词其前有three修饰需要用复数形式故把friend改成friends。句意：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。

　　答案　friend→friends

　　解析　考查动名词作宾spend...(in)doing sth结构故把sing改成singing。

　　答案　sing→singing

　　解析　考查代词。根据句意指的是花费很多钱故用much而非many。句意：那真的花费很多。

　　答案　many→much

　　解析　考查连词。上一分句句意：我不想再去；下一分句句意：我怕失去他们的友so改成but。

　　答案　so→but

　　解析　考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语故用what。

　　答案　How→What

　　解析　考查虚拟语气。根据句意可知此处为虚拟语气与现在事实不符故把are改成were。句意：如果你是我。

　　答案　are→were

　　解析　考查代词。根据上文可知作者交了三个朋友故用them。句意：你会和他们说吗？

　　答案　him→them

　　解析　考查动词。动词help为及物动词其后接宾语时无需加介词故去掉with。句意：请帮帮我给我一些建议。

　　答案　去掉with

　　Passage 4　(2024·陕西)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线(

　　)并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　ecide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.

　　At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”

　　My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

　　答案　

　　last week.I wanted to do

　　special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the

　　biscuits in the world，so I

　　to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic

　　of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really .My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor

　　I was packing them up.

　　party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just

　　get some more of these biscuits.”

　　My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me

　　the biscuits with happy laughter!

　　1.解析　last week上个星期前面无需加冠词。

　　答案　去掉in

　　解析　something用在肯定句中表示“一些事”任何事”。

　　答案　anything→something

　　解析　我的妈妈做了世界上最好吃的饼干此处不是比较含义应是最高级(best)。

　　答案　better→best

　　解析　全文的时态都是一般过去时故把decide改为decided。

　　答案　decide→decided

　　解析　根据前面的some应该是复数形式。

　　答案　step→steps

　　解析　作表语的是形容词good是副词作状语。

　　答案　well→good

　　解析　我唯一所犯的错误就是当我包装饼干的时候掉在地上一些。when/while当……的时候在……之后。

　　答案　after→when/while

　　解析　此处表特指在晚会上。

　　答案　a→the

　　解析　动词不定式表示目的我也许得再退休一次能吃到更多的饼干。

　　答案　just后加to

　　解析　and连接两个并列的(动)名词enjoying。

　　答案　enjoy→enjoying

　　Passage 5　(2024·浙江)

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误

　　2.只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　－hand side of the class full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.

　　1.解析　考查名词的复数形式。前面有three修饰故要用复数形式。

　　答案　第一句：side→sides

　　解析　考查固定表达。be made of是指不经过加工能直接看出原材料；be made from是指经过加工不能直接看出原料。

　　答案　第一句：from→of

　　解析　考查非谓语动词。动词enjoy后要接动名词作宾语。

　　答案　第二句：sit→sitting

　　解析　考查形容词和副词的错用。修饰动词see要有副词形式。

　　答案　第三句：easy→easily

　　解析　考查动词的时态。本文描述的是作者原来的旧教室故要时态保持一致用一般过去时。

　　答案　第五句：is→was

　　解析　考查代词的错用。代替前面的单数a beautiful park要用it。

　　答案　第六句：them→it