2024届高考英语二轮专题热点集训：专题17 书面表达
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趋势2024·江西）
假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。
1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚，友善；
3.学会其他：考生自拟。
注意：1.词数120左右；
2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on learning in senior high school.____________________________________________________________
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Thank you!
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Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on learning in senior high school.
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.
In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
No pains, no gains. I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and harmonious environment.
That’s all.
Thank you!
重点词汇和短语：challenging 挑战性的
efficiently高效率地
get involved in参与
take part in参加
build up增强
高级句型：
1)It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.强调句式强调作状语的介词短语
2)I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and harmonious environment. that引导表语从句
【典例2】（2024·天津）
假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津，得知美国学生Chris作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件：
(1)表示欢迎；
(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如天气、饮食等)；
(3)介绍本班情况；
(4)希望Chris做哪些事情，以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊。
注意：
(1)请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。
(2)可适当加入细节， 使内容充实，行文连贯。
(3)词数不少于100； 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。
(4)参考词汇：交换生 exchange student
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. ____________________________________
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Yours,
Li Jin
【范文】
’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. I’m more than glad to know that you’re coming to be with us as an exchange student this coming term. In fact, all my classmates are kind and look forward to your coming, and are willing to accept you as one of us.
Besides, I hope that you’ll have no difficulty adapting to the food and weather here. It is generally not too hot in summer here and we have relatively warm winter, compared to that in America. We have rice and noodles as our main food, which I hope you’ll like.
Indeed, we feel excited in having you as our new classmates. For one thing, through daily contact we can have a better knowledge of Chinese and American cultures and social customs. In addition, we view this as a good chance for us to improve our English.
Hope to receive you soon as one of us.
Yours,
Li Jin
重点短语：more than，look forward to，be willing to，have (no) difficulty (in)doing sth，adapt to，compare…to，have a good knowledge of等。
高级句型：1)I’m more than glad to know that you’re coming to be with us as an exchange student this coming term. 使用了more than，that引导的宾语从句，以及现在进行时表示将来动作；
2)It is generally not too hot in summer here and we have relatively warm winter, compared to that in America.使用了and连接并列句，过去分词短语作状语，that表替代
3)For one thing, through daily contact we can have a better knowledge of Chinese and American cultures and social customs. 这个单句使用了过渡词语，短语have a good knowledge of以及形容词比较级。
【技巧点拨】
1.提纲类记叙文的写作中，要注意下面几个方面：
1)注意文章的体裁、格式、时态等，迅速组织写作素材。如果是半开放式的提示，则要求结合自己熟悉的生活或话题展开叙述；
2)注意领会提纲的含义，不能遗漏提纲要点，在展开叙述的时候也不能离题太远，要做到能展开，也能迅速收拢。
3)注意正确运用时态和人称。
2.说明文的写作一般来说大致可分为三个部分：第一部分提出主题，要阐述、说明的主要内容；第二部分对文章的主题进行展开说明；第三部分对文章的主题作归纳总结。在文章开始时提出需要说明的东西和观点，然后用first，second，…and finally加以罗列说明举例法用具体的例子来说明我们要表达的意思，常用for example，for instance，still another example is…等词语引出 比较法对两个对象进行比较，从而进行说明的写作手法比较相同点和比较不同点两种方法在比较相同点的时候，常用到similarly，also，too，in the same case，in spite of the difference等这样的词语however，on the other hand，in contrast，but，nevertheless等表示转折的词语常用来引导对不同点的比较….(在某方面). In…, there were …But by last year, the number of…had reached up to…(达到多少).
2. It can be clearly seen from the chart that the average number of…has reached…, with a rise of 20% for the past/last five years.
3. We can see from the chart that there is a tendency toward…, and the number of people who…has dropped/risen/increased from…to…, with an annual increase of…
第二段：说明原因
Several reasons may account for/have contributed to/lead to/have caused such changes/tendency. For one thing/To begin with…For another thing/What’s more…Finally…
第三段：陈述自己的看法
1.In my opinion,…
2. Therefore, it goes without saying that…
As is revealed/shown in the chart/diagram, there has been a sharp increase/decrease in the…From the sharp increase/decrease in the chart, it goes without saying that…
There are at least two reasons that account for this…On one hand,…on the other hand…. …is due to the fact that…In addition,…is responsible for…There may be some other reasons for…But it’s generally believed that the reasons mentioned are commonly convincing.
As far as I’m concerned, I hold the view that …
【典例1】（2024·广东·基础习作你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。写作内容请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道，内容包括：人物：英国人查理德·阿维斯Richard Avis)
出生日期：1974年12月1日
：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人
目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义
相关信息：
●借助当地媒体寻找
●迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家
●职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等
●计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人●打算根据此经历写一本书 ★注：同年同月同日生的人：time twin
写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容
评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。___________________________________________________________________________
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对于不同类型的图表，考生做到对图表描述的关键心中有数。包括图表的类型、表示数据变化趋势的动词和名词（如上升、下降、持平、波动等）、表示变化程度的副词和对应的形容词。句型上包括：图表写作的描述段（即开篇段落的句型表达）、表达对比、描述趋势等。一些图表写作特有的问题，如突出图表描述的重点、准确描述总趋势、注意时态使用（图表中经常有不同的年份信息）词汇和句式表达力求多变。情景作文假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记记述爸爸出差期间，妈妈生病，你照顾她的过程。
注意：1.周记的开头已经为你写好 词数不少于60________________________________________________________________
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【范文】
Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days. Just the next morning I found my mother wasn’t feeling well. She had a cold. I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her. With my special care, my mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. He praised me for what I had done.
I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.
重点短语：go on a trip出门；远行 prepare sth. for sb.为某人准备某物come back回来
高级句型：
1) When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. when引导状语从句和what引导名词从句
2) I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.that引导宾语从句
【技巧点拨】
一．看图作文记叙文的写作
对于记叙文的看图作文，考生要仔细读图，弄清各图之间的联系，确定写作要点，并注意把握或拓展故事的时间线索，在审题时注意明确时态、人称、故事的发展等各环节，并且要列出相关的文字提纲，将图画内容转化为文字材料，这样更有利于有条理地展开叙述。
【2】（201 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题用英语写一篇作文。
参考词汇: banner (横幅) stump (树桩)你的作文应包括以下内容1. 简要描述两幅图的内容2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解3. 举例说明两幅图对你的启示。注意1.可参照图片适当发挥2.作文词数150 左右3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息如校名、人名等。
Actions Speak Louder than Words
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【范文】
Actions Speak Louder than Words
People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.
The message conveyed here is clear: “Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees, to better the environment.
Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.
重点短语：put up a banner竖起一面旗子
suffer severe damage遭受严重破坏
take practical measures采取实际措施
better the environment优化环境
donate books捐赠书籍
follow traffic rules遵守交通规则
高级句型：
1. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees. while连接并列句
2.Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish. when引导状语从句，whatever引导名词从句，倒装句式
【技巧点拨】
二.看图作文议论文的写作框架
“三段式”作文是最理想的此类议论文的结构，具体的布局谋篇为：
1.第一段开门见山地叙述图画内容，此时一定要密切围绕图画展开叙述，交代图画中的人物、(地点、时间)、干什么；
2.第二段提出文章的主题，提出论点，围绕图画和主题展开叙述。此时要注意有条理地，一步步地展开叙述，而不要试图在一句话里涵盖太多信息，做到文理清晰，过渡自然。此时要注意把握句与句、段与段之间的连接方式。
3.最后一段，得出结论。此时可以用下面这些方式来结束文章：
(1)用几句话概括全文内容，进一步肯定文章的中心思想；
(2)引用格言、名言等总结全文，这样更显得有说服力；
(3)结合自己或自己身边的事例，发表自己的看法。
◇考点4开放类作文
【基础知识梳理】
与传统的“控制性作文”相比，开放式作文所给提示比较简略，要求学生根据所给图画进行简单描述后阐述自己的看法。学生在写作时要充分发挥想象力和创造力，自己拓展主题，组织篇章结构。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.
2.议论抒怀，如：请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。A mother said, “My son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with his friends. or in his room. He never has time to talk to me.”May 31, No Smoking Day, is drawing near. Now what do you want to say to the smokers to help them get rid of the bad habit?
4. 设计活动，如：You are talking with one of your close friends about your plans for the summer vacation. You say to him, “I’m going to enjoy myself in the summer vacation.” He asks, “what exactly are you going to do to have fun?”
5. 解释原因，如：Tell your friends why you are looking forward to the weekend.
6. 发表评论，如：In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain
