英语四级写作计划第一周第1天说明现象类佳作赏析
五、每日佳作赏析
Directions:For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled . The Celebration of Western Festivals . You shoule write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese :
1.现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日。
2.产生这种现象的原因。
3.这种现象可能带来的影响。
范文
In recent years many Chinese people like to celebrate western festivals . Even some youngsters are paying as great attention to Christmas as our Spring Festival . In addition , other western festivals , like April Fools day and Valentines Day , are very popular among Chinese people .
Many reasons contribute to this pheno-menon . Among them , relaxing and comfortable atmosphere from westem festivals plays a crtitcal role . Moreover , more and more Chinese people begin to leam English , which provides them with more chances to be exposed to westm culture and festivals . Besides , many businessmen desperatcly try to boost the atmosphere of foreign festivals to attract more customers .
As far as I am concemed , our paying too much attention to western festivals will bring some side effects . The popularity of western festivals to some extent has influence our traditions . Therefore , I suggest that people should not be immersed too much in the western festivals but ingore Chinese traditional festivals .
点评
意为 和 一样 ， 同级比较。
街接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。
引出原因常用句式。
which引导非限制性定语从句。
意为 暴露于 。
用于引出个人观点。
意为 带来负面影响 。
意为 在某种程度上 。
意为 不是 而是 ，连接并列结构。
意为 过分沉浸在 中 。
五、每日佳作赏析
Directions:For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled . The Celebration of Western Festivals . You shoule write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese :
1.现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日。
2.产生这种现象的原因。
3.这种现象可能带来的影响。
范文
In recent years many Chinese people like to celebrate western festivals . Even some youngsters are paying as great attention to Christmas as our Spring Festival . In addition , other western festivals , like April Fools day and Valentines Day , are very popular among Chinese people .
Many reasons contribute to this pheno-menon . Among them , relaxing and comfortable atmosphere from westem festivals plays a crtitcal role . Moreover , more and more Chinese people begin to leam English , which provides them with more chances to be exposed to westm culture and festivals . Besides , many businessmen desperatcly try to boost the atmosphere of foreign festivals to attract more customers .
As far as I am concemed , our paying too much attention to western festivals will bring some side effects . The popularity of western festivals to some extent has influence our traditions . Therefore , I suggest that people should not be immersed too much in the western festivals but ingore Chinese traditional festivals .
点评
意为 和 一样 ， 同级比较。
街接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。
引出原因常用句式。
which引导非限制性定语从句。
意为 暴露于 。
用于引出个人观点。
意为 带来负面影响 。
意为 在某种程度上 。
意为 不是 而是 ，连接并列结构。
意为 过分沉浸在 中 。
